Deck Help

[OnePower]

Hi
I'm asking 4 help. I need to know what should be in my deck, what i should take out or add.
Spell Cards
monster reborn
swords revealing
raigki
scapegoat
change of heart
heavy storm
greed
dark hole
snatch steal
giant trunade
MST
black pendant
eternal rest
toon world

Trap Cards
trap hole
cylinder
negate attack
mirror force
waboku
ultimate offering
widespread ruin
crush
shadow spell
seven tools

Nomal Monsters

mystical elf
La Jinn
vorse x 2
red seasnake
dunames dark witch
7 colored fish
cyber tech alligator

Effect Monsters

witch black forest
man eater bug
copycat
magician o faith
Sangan
sinister serpent
penguin soldier
kuriboh
dimensional warrior
beast of gilfer
shining angel
giant rat
cyber jar
barrel dragon
toon summoned skull

thats a total of 47 cards. If i draw the right ones it works very well but if i get the wrong ones i'm toast. Any suggetions or help would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks 8)

[DeckMaster]

Hey, majorman, I look at your deck and it seems to be a little disarrange, i`m gonna build your very same deck, and try it out with brokentoy and i`ll get back to you or it will be posted rigt here before the day ends...ok pal. :o

[DeckMaster]

Hey majorman, i used your deck and I got my butt handed to me, so i made a few ajustments, after which I was the one handing over some butt kicking. these are the ajustments I made.
MC= Made Changes
Spells
1, Sword of revieling light
2, monster reborn
3, dark hole
4, raigeki
5, MST
6, COH
7, POT
8, Goat
9, snatch steal
10, Giant trunade
11, heavy storm
12, Delinquent duo (MC)
Traps
13, Cylinder
14, trap hole
15, mirror force
16, x2 waboku (MC Added 1 more)
17, crush card
18, Tools
19, X2 jammers
20, wide spread ruin

Monsters
21, cyber-tech-aligator
22, x3 vorse (MC Added 1 more )
23, mystical elf
Effects
24, cyber jar
25, mophing jar(mc)
24, mof
26, koribo
27, witch of the balck forest
28, sinister serpent
29, barrel dragon
30, X2 Giant rat(MC added 1 more)
31, X2 Dimension warrior ( MC Added 1 more)
32, Penguin soldier
33, Spear critin (MC) Battle helper in a cinch
34, MOD (MC) Did not have enough cards to be used with crush card
35, Total defence shotgun (MC)
36, sangan

And thats 45 cards, if you are gonna use toon monsters then you should make a toon deck, because i just got stuck with these cards looking back at me in my hand.... good luck and have fun.

[OnePower]

Hey Challegemenow
Thanks for the eval of my deck, now all i need is to get the cards that u added i have some but i need another wabouku the magic jammers and the vorse. Oh by the way what is the MOD u added for use with the crush card? And i also need morphing jar. Don't suppose u could help me out?

Thanks A lot :lol:

[DeckMaster]

Hey majorman I have all those cards that you need, if you see me playing yugioh just ask for a trade and i`ll give them to you....see you